Chapter 171

“I hear our girl’s night has been cut short.” Holly stated as she stepped past the threshold and into the house Asher had built for me. As she spoke, her eyes scanned the foyer, her head pivoting back and forth to soak up every detail.

I hummed my confirmation, motioning for her to follow as we passed through the dimly lit kitchen and into the living room. “Sorry about that, things sort of popped up at the last minute.”

“Oh, no worries. I had a feeling something would come up. Truthfully, I’m just happy to be out of the house.” She smiled softly, striking a chord deep within my chest as I noticed the similarities between us. Releasing a sound of interest, she spoke. “Oh, so many windows! This might sound hard to believe, but I absolutely love natural light. I can’t stand being cooped up.”

“That’s not hard to believe at all.” I murmured, thinking back to the meek and obedient girl I’d met, trapped within the walls of the warehouse our father called his home. “Does sunlight hurt you? I
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Aleema Saidwhen will the story be updated?
Dana Lacy Piersonmine still says the book is ongoing
Dana Lacy PiersonWell it's officially been three weeks since there had been an update. I think the author should refund us all the money we've spent on this book, since they can't be bothered to update this book. They're too busy working on another book.
Tianne HamioraI think we should start posting on the book review. How disappointed we are for the long wait of up date
Christie DotsonAt this point I don't know what's going on in the book. The author should be more devoted to her career writing and when she gives a reason why she hasn't updated it is always some over the top explanation and garbage.
Christie DotsonIt's bulls**t she can update her other book and no this one. I will not read a book now unless it says it's complete its a money hole. I blame the author mostly but I agree the app should allow books unless they are complete.
JessicaUpdate the story Why is this such an issue??? They shouldn’t let unfinished books be on these apps It’s so annoying to wait day after day and maybe get one chapter
Toni DunnNot surprising we have no update still !!!!
KayCee PoteatI agree with most of you. If you’re going to write a book and have people pay money to read it, UPDATE IT or FINISH IT!!!! I didn’t spend almost $60 for this unfinished and barely updated once a month bull. It’s a great story and it needs to be a priority before you start any others. Be considerate!
Toni DunnNot surprised that there isn’t a update
PI agree with all these post you can’t expect readers to stay interested in your books if you are neglecting to update the chapters! After waiting for a long time I forgot what the story line was happening and the is the failure of the author not keeping up with her chapters! Be more responsible!
Gillian MurrayReading this and Iridian and the updates are beyond pathetic with both! I think you’re mentally giving up on writing but you need to draw your existing books to a natural conclusion first because this is a paying job! We are paying for a service and you have obligations.
Angie Ashworth PorterfieldI don’t see me paying for the next book from this author either when it’s weeks between updates and then it’s only a short chapter! I’ll spend my money on authors that keep their books going for the fans
Dana Lacy PiersonI have a couple of times now with no real response.
Amanda GibbonsUpdates are way too slow, considering we are paying customers we aren’t being shown much value. I suppose there is a reason books don’t go on sale until they’re finished, and with a real book I pay per book not per chapter…….NO value for money and no consideration for the readers
Dana Lacy Piersonwhen I started this book it said it was complete, then it changed to ongoing.
Puao LopezI have been waiting for a long time now. Does anyone know if there is going to be an update?
PixieAt the beginning, I love how Asher being dominant to Lola and their sexual romantic but the more chapters the more little bored and don’t see much of their romantic or heat sexual. Kinda disappointed.
Amanda GibbonsAbsolutely sick of waiting on new chapters tbh!! Paying a fortune for incomplete work is a joke…..not even regular updates, and to be fair we are overlooking the fact that the author is inconsistent in the storyline etc……honestly expect more for my money
suzgreat advice little sis
Rabiyyah QuddusI'm loving the bond between sisters
MonétStory has been updated!!!
VictoriaSo you said today 3 days ago and the tomorrow you stated would have been 2 days ago. So …… still…… W….A….I….T….I….N….G
Ashley GwinFollowing follow
GraceAfter spending a lot of money can you tell me when the update is coming as the book is clearly no where near finished and I don’t think an author should write any other books before completing one - doesn’t make sense at all!!
GraceHi this still has not been updated, when will that be? I’ve paid a lot of money to read this to be left with it massively unfinished???
slmarksberryAsher on the back burner
slmarksberryHer last update on this book was June 1st. Since that time she has posted 8 chapters of Iridian and 6 chapters of her new book. You know, the one she said would not interfere with Asher and it will be on the back burner? Since introducing her new book she has posted 3 x as many chapters as Asher.
slmarksberryI just did. To warn other readers not to start any of her books until completed. She has to many excuses and she doesn't do as she says. No one should read another of her books while in progress. She doesn't care about her readers.
slmarksberryIt has been 4 weeks. Last update was June 1st.
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