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Chapter 119
“You’re sure?” I asked Mason, my irritation increasing with each missing piece thrust in front of my face.
Mason met Asher and I on our way to Carson’s parent’s house. My stomach was rumbling from the lack of food, but I wasn’t sure I’d be able to keep anything down if I tried. Just the thought of facing the shattered remains of her family, it left my nerves frayed and exposed.
He nodded, just as perplexed. “Positive. Not only was Carson the only one with access to the sororit
Jane DoeHello everyone! <3 I am back from my holiday break and ready to get some writing done! I hope that everyone had a wonderful holiday themselves!
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pradas52008Clara not everyone has the same level of understanding. What could be hard for you may be easy for another. How about sympathy? Also, when writing the author should think about how the book would be interpreted. That's part of the fun when writing.
Puao Lopezso looking forward to reading the whole book. hoped u had a restful holiday. waiting with anticipation.
HaylAnd a complete personality change. At least Devin was funny
B Holtkamp Bwhlove this book. everytime I think I have who I think it is pinpointed something happens and I change my mind lol.
Louise cookeI think Cassidy is involved somehow. She appears too much for her not to be involved. Also Rowena will use the ruse of asking friends just so she can better grip on things. Can’t wait till her sister smells
The sweet sent. I think her grams should appear and safe the day.
Traci WilliamsSuspect list- Cassidy, Brittany (she’s got it coming), and Rowena. I also find Asher’s behavior suspicious, why was he ignoring her at the party? Brandon and Devin also have a special place on the sh!t list.
BrittneyI was wondering the same thing.
Beth LohrstorferBrittany and Cassidy are at the top of my suspect list. Rowena is on there too.
JamieCan you pick a name for Asher’s Beta already? The beginning his name was Drake, then it randomly switched to Devin part way through and now again it’s changed to Blake? I’m confused
Gwen Pousson LeBleuI know you have to "build up" the plot of the story and I am still hanging in there,hoping we get to a point that everything makes sense. Im still wondering why they had to pickup and move to another town...who's taking care of Lola's original pack? I thought it was just a visit at 1st
rmloudd19I hope I'm wrong but I believe that Rowena is not all she claims to be. She popped up so fast and then the attack at her new home came and she happens to appear there to kill the thing. I just don't trust her.
Jessica GrayI was really into the first part of the book. now it seems some details are too much. you're jumping around also in some parts where you should have stayed focused. I am still invested to see how this plays out and ends.
Elizabeth“…powerful witch too…”
ElizabethI don’t trust this first witch. Lola is obviously very powerful but is not aware of how powerful she is yet. Imagine: Luna, Queen of the vampires…she has to a powerful with too!
Kathryn Shotzbarger-FordI agree with you. She escaped but nothing is mentioned whether Alpha Asher sent people after her. I think her Mom, Alpha Freya, was a witch.
Was Renaldi mentioned before, when her Father, The Vampire King, told her of her heritage???
Claretha JacksonWhat happen to Luna Freye's daughter? She is probably the one whose responsible for the killings!
Laura ArnetteI agree this second part is confusing shes jumping all over the place. Somethings that aren’t nessarily needed she describes in great detail and other things you wish had more detail. And them getting from place to place is in detail she’s just there in the next segment of the book.
Clara Michelle WilTo suggest she needs to "Reread" her own book she wrote is absurd. Do you have any idea how many stories she has written and I have read almost and everyone is amazing. It's not hard to follow along. If it then maybe you need to find something different to read. ...
Clara Michelle WilAre you really having that much trouble? First her wolf Maya is still there. She has talked about her and shifted.... and she is part vampire and witch so it only makes since for that to start playing in.... She is doing an amazing Job and is an amazing writer.
Verity Warren-YeuWhy has Asher's Beta gone from Beta Devin to 'Blake' and now Devin is an annoying frat boy???
Brianne CopenhaverGeez, I want so bad to be able to trust these witches. But if she feels like she has to withhold info then probably not
Emily StrunaOmg I was suspicious of these 2 witches. I really hoped one or both wouldn’t end up being enemies. Hopefully at least one will be on her side. But it’s hard to know who to trust. Especially with them wanting to exploit her power
Sandy JoI agree. The 1st part was great! it started going sideways when the vampire line came in the, where we going with the witches?? And where did her wolf go?
Michelle TrotterThe first part of the book was great, the second part is confusing you are over describing little things and then you’re jumping from place to place so I’m getting lost. You need to reread your first part of your book and write the same way that was great.
Kaye ChettaI'm so excited to see what happens next. Always on the edge of my seat. Great job!!
NoraGlad you’re back!! I hope that it was awesome and wonderful! I’ve missed your updates . I’ve been waiting, ……… impatiently for new chapters!
Sandra CadmanI don’t trust this witch I have a feeling this will not end well
Deziraye WaldI was so excited to see a chapter update! Can't wait for more. They have been on such an adventure. While I was waiting on it dates I went ahead and read Alpha Killian after I heard that that was a book. But gosh I was so disappointed in Claire she seems so weak and wimpy compared to Lola
Anita EHope you had A Merry Christmas! Loved the new chapter. Can't wait for more!
TricYou can only buy completed whole books… not complete so how would they know what to charge you
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