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Chapter 51
Lola’s P.o.v
We had finally stopped training some time in the afternoon. I was exhausted and sore, but I could tell Alpha Asher had been holding back. I’m sure he didn’t want to sap all my strength, leaving me tired and sore come tomorrow.
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Gen RitchieI'm so curious if he knows they're mates. didn't she say before that one person could know even if the other isn't 19 yet?
HaylHe could of at least told her she was beautiful….. all he did was talk about her body lmao. Not romantic at all. They have to start having an emotional connection at sone point otherwise it will get boring
Michele HarwellI hate how long it’s taking for her to know who her mate is. And shouldn’t Asher know?
Jojotron28 Are they mates? Does Asher know? Come on man ….
Melissa O'SullivanThis takes way too long to read. I use my daily points and get 1 measly chapter
Cassandra EspeI'm a little disappointed that he didn't take this exact moment to make her feel special.. yeah any dude would say what attracts them on a woman's body, but what does he see in her was what she was asking.. why her.. which may play into her choosing him or Tristan.. why didn't he indulge???
belltiffany30This is such a sexy story and it's so intense to point were you can almost imagine it you
Josie HungerfordI think it sucks i can’t read as much as I would like!
ElizabethI really hope they’re mates
JasmineThis Book is really good, I am so excited to continue. I just feel like it is taking way too long to get to Lola’s 19th birthday. The wait is killing me slowly
Grace StephensHow many smirks can one alpha give, if an alpha could chuck a smirk would chuck a smirk lol
MichelleI couldn’t agree more! I was coming here to comment the same!
Rosalynn DehaasFor f×cks sake stop saying nip.
Ramonsa Tweedy MaySensual torture! When they finally get together it's going to be explosive!
Laura SandersonLove this story so far but the over use of Alpha Asher is getting quite out of hand. It seemed to be almost every other sentence in this chapter. Could she not just call him Asher when she's musing to herself. Or even a bit more he/him throughout.
Mandyfinally they are both showing signs of being mates
Ella Quentalso "rolling nips" is used often as well - maybe try squeezing, tweaking, grazing, etc? sorry for the spam comments- but I hope you don't take any of it to heart. I'd love to see your writing continue to improve
Ella Quentalso I assume you're a girl bc pic and name choice but it def reads like a man who doesn't understand women's bodies or clothing sometimes. I know its a sexier imagery to dispense with reality sometimes but sometimes it's too noticeable
Ella Quentdistracting. also we know he's the Alpha...can we just refer to him as Asher?
Ella Quentsports bra don't come off with ease. not ever unless they're too big (no athletic girl with big breasts would wear one that isn't properly fitted). and leggings don't drop. idk I really like the story and the writing is good but making it more realistic and less 'r/menwritingwomen would be less
Ella Quentyou get a good look at anything unless you're trying to make camel toes sexy? in which case nvm lol
Ella Quentlove the story so far! few things - use of "nips" and "smirk" is a bit often! also...some clothing descriptions just arent...real? like chelsea's 3x too small sports bra from the beginning would just make a uniboob, not something a girl would wear to make her boobs look good. thin panties don't mean
Sarah Nysewanderalso, muscle weighs more than fat, so if she's muscular you need to add more weight
Adrelyn MarianoI am so in to this story, cannot wait for the next chapter...
SuzanneThe constant use of the word “smirk” is very distracting and makes the work look like it hasn’t been edited. I strongly suggest that you word count the usage and adjust the language to add variety.
Andreea Melinda MirzaAm I the only freak that wonders how her leggings just dropped like that? Didn't know leggings can do that, especially the sports ones that give you a camel toe 😅
Chucky PhilippI wish all the ppl who only leave rude negative comments would just zip their lips shut. this is a great story and I and many many others love it and are beyond thankful the author has shared it with us
Jessica KoesterYes please!
Erin Zegarrahope she wins the fight
Sandra Dwhat a tease
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