Alpha Asher mind-linked his Beta, and the two of us waited by Jessie's body until he showed. With Jessie's lifeless face lingering in my mind, Asher turned to face me. His honey eyes were hard as t
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Elizabeth BarryThe grammatical and punctuation errors bug me, top. I can't stand the possessive apostrophes instead of the basic plurals- case in point: not Vampire's but should be simply "vampires". The writer does this constantly.
Cassandra EspeI'm wondering if he doesn't know because she isn't of age yet.. when she is able to age up to mate status.. then maybe they will both know.. but then part of me wonders if he already knows but wants her to find out on her own.. she is gonna slip up with Tristan on this visit.. and jeopardize it all!
Rachel BorumI agree with the above comment. ...
ErianskyI’ve paid more for this than I do for unlimited books on ku and it’s still not half way done. Great story but lots of inconsistencies and I’m afraid the cost has meant I’m not going to finish! Almost £20 paid and it’s not half way through. Pity.
Janice ChoateThe suspense is killing me!!! I do have to point out one major flaw when it comes to werewolf fated true mates, it happens at the age of 18; not at the age of 19..
SandyAsher is over 18 so he
Should already know whether Lola is his mate.
Rosalynn DehaasThere are so many plot holes & inconsistencies it's disheartening. For what this book costs I'd expect the writer to know the differences between they're, their, there, too & to, you're & your, etc. There are many other grammatical & spelling errors as well & you can tell she's stalling for more $$$
ReezeTheir love story is different you will never know if they are fated mates or not...
Paula Niederkohrthe amount of money spent is ridiculous, considering you can't keep facts sraight,time lines down, or even names correct at times.I spend more on these books than I do on established authors.however I do like the story line and would like to congratulate you in following your desire to be a writer
colleen.bull14me too ......
Chemgeek94Ugh not a fan of this new cover . Please bring back the old one!!
Theresa SettyIt’s been like a week since she discovered the shadows but you act like it’s been a month or longer. Do you even keep track of what you’re writing? Christ on a cracker do better.
Vettea month ago? I don't think so.... confusing timeline again
DeAnn BaileyI haven't spent a dime, you just have to have patience and collect coins.
Jamie Ludwig StothartGood storyline but so many inconsistencies and contradictions. For what these cost to read you would think they could pay someone to edit them
Linda GGiovanni is the one who ran into the King and Brittany after her apparent switch to play a game against the pack.
Brittney Annjust earn the daily rewards. read a chapter a day
Brittney Annwhy? I haven't spent anything on it. you can earn daily coins
Dahlia MoonLast time Brittany was in the right and Tyler was in the left. You switched which way they were.
Linnéa Falk JonssonWouldn’t Giovanni know if Brittany is in on it all? 🤔
Victoria HeuettI’m loving the book, but I’m struggling with the timeline. There are areas in the book where it describes a month passing or insinuation of longer time elapsing, but I’ve only counted 18 days since Lola has returned home, and I’m at chapter 80. Can someone point out where more time has passed?
AngeleaAsher knew about the safe and the book. He relieved them from training that morning so they could look at it
Heather Rootunfortunately, I'm not going to be able to finish this story. I've already paid more to read just to this point than I normally pay for a hard copy of a completed book.
Irene Moeller❤Luv this book. 💔I'm sad I won't be able to read the ending. Lost my job so have to save money... My assumption of the ending is Alpha Asher will be the Omega of both species and Lola will be by his side. But you know this book with its unexpected twists...Keep it up the writing 🙈🙉🙊!🥰
ReesonsThat story is shorter.
Kayla Prince" bit me like I was a fucking sausage" ok this had me rolling
ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋreally liking this book, and it's sexy scenes!
ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋits interesting for the older wolf to know that they are mated to someone who is not old enough to know whom their mate is. sounds confusing but, it would give the older one a chance to woo the other so that there are feeling before a mate bond
ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋI didn't know that a werewolf can know who their mate is even if the mate is not old enough to know who their own mate is. seems like a sticky situation
ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋAsher feels *different to her because she can choose her mate.